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Estimados Alumnos de Básico 1. Podeis intentar practicar mini textos escritos en casa comenzando por responder a diferentes respuestas con tres o cuatro frases. Si haceis click sobre el enlace que viene a continuación, éste os llevará a la página "Writing Essays" de Básico 2. Las actividades de vuestro nivel son las que aparecen listadas bajo el título CONTINUE THE STORY

Tened cuidado siempre que hagais una redacción. Volved a leerla una vez que hayais acabado de escribirla y cuidad de no cometer ninguno de estos errores típicos que no son admisibles en básico 1, RECORDAD QUE CON TRES ERRORES GRAVES NO SE APRUEBA EL TEXTO ESCRITO:

· I'm student. --> I'm a student. (article + job)
· My mother doesn't work, Sheis a housewife. --> My mother doesn't work, she is a housewife. (después de coma no se escribe mayúscula)
· I speak spanish. --> I speak Spanish. (Nationality in capital letters)
· I dont work. --> I don't work. (no os olvideis del apóstrofe)
· My teacher's is Spanish. --> My teacher is Spanish. / My teacher's Spanish. (no repetir el mismo verbo dos veces)
· She has a dark hair. --> She has dark hair. ("hair" no lleva artículo)
· I have two nephew and three niece. --> I have two nephews and three nieces. (si hablas en plural, debes escribir los sustantivos en plural)
· I have 30 years. --> I am 30. / I am 30 years old. (se usa el vebo "to be" y o bien no se dice "years old" o bien se dice "years old", pero nunca "years" solo)
· I have two girls and boy. --> I have two girls and a boy.
· I Love my job. --> I love my job. (debeis tener mucho cuidado con la caligrafía, en muchas ocasiones escribís palabras con mayúsculas que no deben serlo)

Tras la prueba escrita de febrero quiero destacar los siguientes errores que seguís cometiendo:

· ... so i'm twenty-six years old. --> ... so i'm twenty-six years old. --> ... so I'm twenty-six years old. (Unit 1A)
· ...because i go to the gym at seven o'clock. --> ...because i go to the gym at seven o'clock. --> ...because I go to the gym at seven o'clock. (Unit 1A)
· I'm from Spain and live in Ceuta. --> I'm from Spain and I live in Ceuta. (Unit 1A)

· I from Spain. --> I'm from Spain. (Unit 1B)
· I from Spain and I live in Ceuta. --> I fromSpain and I live in Ceuta. --> I am from Spain and I live in Ceuta. (Unit 1B)
· My brother and my husband ar teacher too. --> My brother and my husband ar teacher too. --> My brother and my husband are teachers too. (Unit 1B)
· I go to english class twice a week, on monday and on friday. --> I go to English class twice a week, on Mondays and Fridays. (Unit 1B)
· I have 16 years old. --> I have 16 years old. --> I'm 16 years old. (Unit 1C)
· Antonio have syxty years old and Angel fifty. --> Antonio is sixty years old and Angel is fifty. (Unit 1C)
· My sister is twenty-five years old and I thirty. --> My sister is twenty-five years old and I'm thirty. (Unit 1C)
· I'm 32 year old. --> I'm 32 year old. --> I'm 32 years old. (Unit 1C)
· I'm Mar and I twuenty-nine years old. --> I'm Mar and I am twuenty-nine years old. (Unit 1C)
· My sisters have 34 and 32 years old and Francisco 29. --> My sisters are 34 and 32 years old and Francisco is 29. (Unit 1C)
· My brother is thirty year old and my nephew two years old. --> My brother is thirty years old and my nephew is two years old. (Unit 1C)
· Virginia is thirty years old and Sonia twenty-two years old, and my mother is sixty-five years old. --> Virginia is thirty years old and Sonia twenty-two years old, and my mother is sixty-five years old. --> Virginia is thirty years old, Sonia is twenty-two years old, and my mother is sixty-five years old. (Unit 1C)
· My sister is a nurse. she is a thirty-eight year old. --> My sister is a nurse. she is a thirty-eight year old. --> My sister is a nurse. She is thirty-eight years old.
· I have big family. --> I have a big family. (Unit 1D)
· I don't have big family. --> I don't have big family. --> I don't have a big family. (Unit 1D)
· I work in security center. --> I work in a security center. (Unit 1D)
· I have two sister. --> I have two sisters. (Unit 1D)
· A lot of kiss. --> A lot of kisses. (Unit 1D)
· Is forty-three. --> She is forty-three. (Unit 1D)
· I don't a big family but I married and I have two sons. --> I don't have a big family but I'm married and I have two sons. (Unit 2A)
· I have a big family; Three Brothers. Their name's Andrés, Rubén, José and 30, 27 and 26 years old. --> I have a big family; Three Brothers. Their name's Andrés, Rubén, José and 30, 27 and 26 years old. --> I have a big family. I have three brothers. Their names are Andrés, Rubén and José. They are 30, 27 and 26 years old. (Unit 2A)
· My parents lives in Asturias. --> My parents lives in Asturias. --> My parents live in Asturias. (Unit 2A)
· My son work in Madrid and my daughter study in Granada. --> My son works in Madrid and my daughter studies in Granada. (Unit 2A)
· I student english. --> I student english. --> I study English. (Unit 2A)
· My sisters works in ... --> My sisters works in ... --> My sisters work in ... (Unit 2A)
· I'm single, but not live alone. --> I'm single, but I don't live alone. (Unit 2A)
· In the evening, go to English classes or does homework. --> In the evening, I go to English classes or I do my homework.
· My mother is housewife. --> My mother is a housewife. (Unit 2C)
· I'm fireman and I like very much working in this city. --> I'm fireman and I like very much working in this city. --> I'm a fireman and I like working in this city very much. (Unit 2C)
· My job is policeman. --> My job is policeman. --> I'm a policeman. (Unit 2C)
· I'm teacher. --> I'm a teacher. (Unit 2C)
· I'm administrative. --> I'm an administrative. (Unit 2C)
· My father is driver and my mother is shop assistant. --> My father is driver and my mother is shop assistant. --> My father is a driver and my mother is a shop assistant. (Unit 2C)
· I'm a teachers. --> I'm a teachers. --> I'm a teacher. (Unit 2C)
· Mi brother are policeman. --> Mi brother are policeman. --> My brother is a policeman. (Unit 2C)
· My mother and my father are an administrative. --> My mother and my father are an administrative. --> My mother and my father are administratives. (Unit 2C)
· My mother is a homework and my father is a police-office. --> My mother is a homework and my father is a police-office. --> My mother is a housewife and my father is a police-officer. (Unit 2C)
· My parent's names are. Juan and Luisa. --> My parent's names are.Juan and Luisa. --> My parents' names are Juan and Luisa. (Unit 2D)
· I live with my children, one daught and one son. --> I live with my children, one daught and one son. --> I live with my children, one daughter and one son. (Unit 2D)
· My parent are retired. --> My parent are retired. --> My parents are retired. (Unit 1D, 2D)
· Lucía is my son. --> Lucía is my son. --> Lucía is my daughter. (Unit 2D)
· I have two niece and one nephew. --> I have two niece and one nephew. --> I have two nieces and one nephew. (Unit 2D)
· I have a three sisters and one brother. --> I have a three sisters and one brother. --> I have three sisters and one brother. (Unit 2D)
· I have one sister an two niece. --> I have one sister an two niece. --> I have one sister and two nieces. (Unit 2D)
· I have shower. --> I have a shower. (Unit 3B)
· I go to work at quarter past eight o'clock. --> I go to work at quarter past eight o'clock. --> I go to work at quarter past eight. (Unit 3B)
· I usually in the evenig go to English school. --> I usually in the evenig go to English school. --> I usually go to English school in the evening. (Unit 3B)
· I usually in the evening wach TV. --> I usually in the evening wach TV. --> I usually watch TV in the evening. (Unit 3B)
· Then have breakfast and I get dressed. --> Then I have breakfast and I get dressed. (Unit 3B)
· Then I go work. --> Then I go to work. (Unit 3B)
· I go my English class. --> I go to my English class. (Unit 3B)
· I listen the radio. --> I listen to the radio. (Unit 3B)
· I go to gym a once week. --> I go to gym a once week. --> I go to the gym once a week. (Unit 3C)
· I go to English class twice of weeken. --> I go to English class twice of weeken. --> I go to English class twice a week.
· I have a shower then I go to work. --> I have a shower and then I go to work. (Unit 3Writing)
· I usually get up at seven o'clock after I have breakfast. --> I usually get up at seven o'clock afterI have breakfast. --> I usually get up at seven o'clock, after that / then I have breakfast. (Unit 3Writing)
· I usually drink a cup of coffe and after I have a shower. --> I usually drink a cup of coffe and after that / then I have a shower.
· I usually get up at eight o'clock. After I have breakfast and I go to work. --> I usually get up at eight o'clock. After I have breakfast and I go to work. --> I usually get up at eight o'clock. Then / After that I have breakfast and I go to work. (Unit 3Writing)
· Then I have a shower. Then have dinner at about 10:00 o'clock. Then I go to sleep at 11:30 o'clock. --> Then I have a shower. Then have dinner at about 10:00 o'clock. ThenI go to sleep at 11:30 o'clock. --> Then I have a shower. After that I have dinner at about 10:00 o'clock. Then I go to sleep at 11:30 o'clock. (Unit 3Writing) (No repitais tan seguido "then ... then .... then" utilizad otros sinónimos como por ejemplo "after that").
· They work in a hospital But my mother works in and office because she is lawyer. --> They work in a hospital But my mother works in and office because she is lawyer --> They work in a hospital but my mother works in an office because she is a lawyer. (Unit 3Writing)
· I like very much going to the cinema. --> I like very much going to the cinema. --> I like going to the cinema very much.


Frases que enriquecen vuestro writing:

· I love her because she's always there when I need her. (conectores)
· He is from Cadiz but he lives in Ceuta because he works here. (conectores)
· My favourite day of the week is Saturday because I go out with my friends at night. (conectores)
· After dinner, I usually go to a party where I dance with my friends. (conectores)




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